Thanks Quirky! I appreciate the offer and I WILL DEFEINITELY take you up on it. This fic is actually Chalie/Colby, even though Don is in it....just brotherly though (which drives my room mate cray, LMAO). I did put the first chapter up, but then my muse went to bed....you know, morning sickness *wink*. I can always send that to you. I think that it needs a little tweaking and I'm just not sure where.